The Other Wes Moore
This draft is very general and too short. You must show an analysis of the events in the book. Did you read the entire book? Can you discuss in detail how their mothers’ parenting affected the two boys? Who were the other Wes’ role models? What did he learn from his role models?
Who were the author’s role models? What were the major choices the two Wes Moores made, the inflection points that affected their lives” Be very specific. Your 2nd draft should be at least 3 pages long and your final draft should be 3 -4 pages long.