Veganism From A Vegan By Rob Greenfield

My professor said “ your argument is confusing and lacks support, hence failing to prove your argument. First, how are Greenfield’s comments about factory farming “non-relevant”? (should be irrelevant). Also, I have no clue what claim you are trying to make in your second paragraph as your writing is confused and in need of clarification. Finally, you must never refer to an author by just their first name, and your paper lacks internal citations and a work cited page. Grade= D”