I have attached a complete paper. The Professor gave some feedback:
“It may be best to start with a sentence listing recommendation. I believe these two approaches will eliminate the challenges at Microsoft. 1,…. & 2….. ”
( I already wrote the recommendations, just arrange them based on suggestion above )
“You mention structures to incorporate- what structures would you use and why”?
“How would you create a favorable environment for the employees to achieve success”?
“Summary to redefine the approaches you will use would be nice to see”
Please make one page of adjustment for my paper, you can fit the one page of work in where it should be. Thanks